Monday, February 4, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21

Should performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, be allowed in sports? I think PED's should not be allowed in sports because it's not natural, not fair to other players that don't use it, and can harm your body. I think maybe *periodicly* you can use it but I dont think it should be a *primary* option. It can really hurt you if you use it like an every day *tradition*. In conclusion I think PED's shouldn't be allowed in sports.
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  1. Ms. PriesterFebruary 9, 2013 at 7:33 PM

    Jasthan, you have good ideas in this paragraph. If you break each concept into a sentence and elaborate on it, your arguments will be strengthened. I like that you used the word form of "periodically" of the vocabulary word "period."

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